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The perfect one by ~Pimpette22:iconPimpette22:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Spoken Word


I have finally found
The Perfect One,
Right when I thought
I never had a chance
With love.

The perfect one came along
To wipe all my tears away.
I never thought
In a million years,
This guy would truly
Be the one for me.

He treats me like
A girl should be treated.
He tells me things
I never thought
I would hear.
I hope he knows
How much I care.
I hope he knows
How much in love I am.

The first night
We kissed
Was the greatest
Moment for me.
I knew right then
We were truly
Meant to be.

I want this
Special Someone
To know
How I truly feel.
John, I love you
With all my heart,
And I always will.
©2004-2009 ~Pimpette22
:iconpimpette22:

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~Brittdabratt22 Nov 27, 2004, 9:17:01 PM
WOW very good probably one of your best I :heart: it definatley a :+fav:

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"Cupid works for the devil be suspisous if he cries,Sex is usually good yeah but it aint always right,Choclate is a band-aid no matter what they say shoes dont strech and men dont change!!"--Please read my poems and comment on them!-
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~couladin127 Nov 27, 2004, 9:17:32 PM
amazing stuff...it seems like you really put your heart into what you write....I like it!!!!
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~Pimpette22 Nov 27, 2004, 9:21:35 PM
Thanx! I do I put my heart into everything that I do!! especially if it involves family, friends, and of course a person who enters both family and friends thats my Boyfriend,John. but thanx for the comment it is always appreciated :hug:
:heart: Cordillia

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Time is a wate of life,life is a waste of time,so get wasted all of the time and have the time of your life!!!
:hug: :lmao:
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~KagomeResurrected Nov 27, 2004, 9:27:28 PM
this is really good.....you're an excellent writer, more please!

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*KagomeResurrected :heart: @summaro :heart: *KagomeResurrected

sammich :faint:
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~Pimpette22 Nov 27, 2004, 9:32:09 PM
Thanx..there will be more d/W about that
:heart: Cordillia

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Time is a wate of life,life is a waste of time,so get wasted all of the time and have the time of your life!!!
:hug: :lmao:
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~celestial-elevator Dec 21, 2004, 1:09:56 AM
also sweet...I rarely manage to write love poems myself..well done!

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And the soul outwears the breast,
And the heart must pause to breath

-George Gordon Byron

My poetry
:iconpimpette22:
~Pimpette22 Dec 21, 2004, 1:11:29 AM
Thank you!!!
:heart: Cordillia

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*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Time is a wate of life,life is a waste of time,so get wasted all of the time and have the time of your life!!!
:hug: :lmao:
:iconcelestial-elevator:
~celestial-elevator Dec 21, 2004, 1:13:20 AM
:clap: :clap: :clap:

--
And the soul outwears the breast,
And the heart must pause to breath

-George Gordon Byron

My poetry
:iconpimpette22:
~Pimpette22 Dec 21, 2004, 1:13:58 AM
Awww,Thanks
:heart: Cordillia

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*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Time is a wate of life,life is a waste of time,so get wasted all of the time and have the time of your life!!!
:hug: :lmao:
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